Hi Marek,
Looks good, but a few things need fixing.
In the Normative References section, I see some of the references removed, but their attached footnote numbers still remain (see footnote numbers 1 and 5)
Also, please see the editorial note in 4.8.3. It asks for the eDOCSIS reference to be added to the Bibliography.
Glen
From: Marek Hajduczenia <mxhaj79@xxxxxxxxx>
Sent: Friday, December 16, 2022 8:54 AM
To: STDS-1904-4-TF@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
Subject: Re: [1904.4 TF] 1904.4 Open action items
Hi Curtis et al.,
Attached please find the contribution to address action item #46, cleaning up references and splitting the remaining references into normative and informative ones. Please let me know if anything is missing and I will update the document and submit together with the comments against D1.2.
regards
Marek
On 12/14/22 09:07, Curtis Knittle wrote:
Colleagues,
Below you will find the current list of assigned and open action items.
Curtis
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