Dear colleagues, Below is the series of comments to address my Action Item #40, i.e., “Review and update all relevant references in Clause 2” – please let me know if you have any comments / concerns with the proposed changes. Regards Marek Editorial | Yes | 27 | 2 | 24 | This comment addresses Action Item #40: IEEE Std 802.1ad is no more and it has been merged into 802.1Q standard | Here is the list of needed changes: - remove IEEE Std 802.1ad reference - update IEEE Std 802.1Q to read as follows: "IEEE Std 802.1Q-2018™, Standard for Local and Metropolitan Area Networks—Bridges and Bridged Networks." - remove text on page 97, line 17 from "Note that all of the defined device-based VLAN modes may operate on single-tagged (IEEE Std 802.1Q-17 compliant) or double-tagged (IEEE Std 802.1ad™-compliant) frames" to "Note that all of the defined device-based VLAN modes may operate on single-tagged or double-tagged (IEEE Std 802.1Q compliant) frames" - change all instances of "IEEE 802.1ah layer" to "MAC-in-MAC layer" - afterwards, change "This layer exists only in IEEE 802.1ah" to "This layer exists only in MAC-in-MAC" - afterwards, change all references to "IEEE Std 802.1ah" to "IEEE Std 802.1Q"; - finally, change in Table 14-159 the term "PREAMBLE_802.1ah" to "PREAMBLE_MAC_in_MAC" | Editorial | Yes | 27 | 2 | 27 | This comment addresses Action Item #40: update references to IEEE Std 802.1AE and IEEE Std 802.1X | Make the following changes: - remove IEEE Std 802.1AE™-2006" from the draft, it is not used anymore - remove IEEE Std 802.1X™-2004" from the draft, it is not used anymore - remove IEEE Std 802.1X™-2010" from the draft, it is not used anymore | Editorial | Yes | 28 | 2 | 7 | This comment addresses Action Item #40: update references to IEEE Std 802.3 | Make the following changes: - change publication year for 802.3 from 2015 to 2018 (we will need to likely change that one against when 802.3dc project is done and 2021 release becomes available) - remove IEEE Std 802.3ah - remove IEEE Std 802.3av - insert IEEE Std 802.3ac™-2020, Amendment 9 to IEEE Std 802.3™‐2018, Physical Layer Specifications and Management Parameters for 25 Gb/s and 50 Gb/s Passive Optical Networks - add to IEEE Std 802.3az™‐2010: ", now part of IEEE Std 802.3™" | Editorial | Yes | 28 | 2 | 21 | This comment addresses Action Item #40: update ITU-T references | Make the following changes: - update date for G.984.3 to 2014.01 - update date for G.987.1 to 2016.03 |
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