RE: [1904.4 TF] Action item #40

["Marek Hajduczenia" <mxhajduczenia@xxxxxxxxx>]

Glen,

 

Thank you for the feedback – I fixed 802.3ac to 802.3ca, fat fingers and nothing more on my side.

 

As far as the normative vs informative, I agree with your suggestion to clean up the draft once we’re technically complete. I would recommend this is converted into a new AI and assigned to me, with delivery timeline for D2.1.  

 

Marek

 

From: Glen Kramer <glen.kramer@xxxxxxxxxxxx>
Sent: Friday, July 16, 2021 3:59 PM
To: mxhajduczenia@xxxxxxxxx; STDS-1904-4-TF@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
Subject: RE: [1904.4 TF] Action item #40

 

Marek,

 

This looks good. Note that in the comment #3, “802.3ac” should be “802.3ca”.

 

Also, I think most of the normative references we have do not qualify as normative references according to IEEE style manual. They should be bibliographical entries. At some point (after the draft is technically complete), we should review all normative references and move most of them to bibliography annex. This would be a separate action item though.

 

 

Glen

 

From: Marek Hajduczenia <mxhajduczenia@xxxxxxxxx>
Sent: Wednesday, July 7, 2021 8:02 AM
To: STDS-1904-4-TF@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
Subject: [1904.4 TF] Action item #40

 

Dear colleagues,

 

Below is the series of comments to address my Action Item #40, i.e., “Review and update all relevant references in Clause 2” – please let me know if you have any comments / concerns with the proposed changes.

 

Regards

 

Marek

 

Editorial	Yes	27	2	24	This comment addresses Action Item #40: IEEE Std 802.1ad is no more and it has been merged into 802.1Q standard	Here is the list of needed changes: - remove IEEE Std 802.1ad reference - update IEEE Std 802.1Q to read as follows: "IEEE Std 802.1Q-2018™, Standard for Local and Metropolitan Area Networks—Bridges and Bridged Networks." - remove text on page 97, line 17 from "Note that all of the defined device-based VLAN modes may operate on single-tagged (IEEE Std 802.1Q-17 compliant) or double-tagged (IEEE Std 802.1ad™-compliant) frames" to "Note that all of the defined device-based VLAN modes may operate on single-tagged or double-tagged (IEEE Std 802.1Q compliant) frames" - change all instances of "IEEE 802.1ah layer" to "MAC-in-MAC layer" - afterwards, change "This layer exists only in IEEE 802.1ah" to "This layer exists only in MAC-in-MAC" - afterwards, change all references to "IEEE Std 802.1ah" to "IEEE Std 802.1Q"; - finally, change in Table 14-159 the term "PREAMBLE_802.1ah" to "PREAMBLE_MAC_in_MAC"
Editorial	Yes	27	2	27	This comment addresses Action Item #40: update references to IEEE Std 802.1AE and IEEE Std 802.1X	Make the following changes: - remove IEEE Std 802.1AE™-2006" from the draft, it is not used anymore - remove IEEE Std 802.1X™-2004" from the draft, it is not used anymore - remove IEEE Std 802.1X™-2010" from the draft, it is not used anymore
Editorial	Yes	28	2	7	This comment addresses Action Item #40: update references to IEEE Std 802.3	Make the following changes: - change publication year for 802.3 from 2015 to 2018 (we will need to likely change that one against when 802.3dc project is done and 2021 release becomes available) - remove IEEE Std 802.3ah - remove IEEE Std 802.3av - insert IEEE Std 802.3ac™-2020, Amendment 9 to IEEE Std 802.3™‐2018, Physical Layer Specifications and Management Parameters for 25 Gb/s and 50 Gb/s Passive Optical Networks - add to IEEE Std 802.3az™‐2010: ", now part of IEEE Std 802.3™"
Editorial	Yes	28	2	21	This comment addresses Action Item #40: update ITU-T references	Make the following changes: - update date for G.984.3 to 2014.01 - update date for G.987.1 to 2016.03

 

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