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Re: [1904.4 TF] 1904.4 Open action items

Thank you, this one was added to the list (see attached) - I will also include a comment to remove the editorial note in red and insert a new call-out in the correct place.

Regards

Marek

On 12/16/22 13:20, Glen Kramer wrote:

https://www.cablelabs.com/specifications/CM-SP-eDOCSIS

 

From: Marek Hajduczenia <mxhaj79@xxxxxxxxx>
Sent: Friday, December 16, 2022 10:56 AM
To: Glen Kramer <000006d1020766de-dmarc-request@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx>; STDS-1904-4-TF@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
Subject: Re: [1904.4 TF] 1904.4 Open action items

 

I could not locate any specific eDOCSIS spec to reference - Curtis, can you call in your expert(s) ?

I will move the hanging footnotes, thank you

Marek

On 12/16/22 11:53, Glen Kramer wrote:

Hi Marek,

 

Looks good, but a few things need fixing.

In the Normative References section, I see some of the references removed, but their attached footnote numbers still remain (see footnote numbers 1 and 5)

 

Also, please see the editorial note in 4.8.3. It asks for the eDOCSIS reference to be added to the Bibliography.

 

Glen

 

From: Marek Hajduczenia <mxhaj79@xxxxxxxxx>
Sent: Friday, December 16, 2022 8:54 AM
To: STDS-1904-4-TF@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
Subject: Re: [1904.4 TF] 1904.4 Open action items

 

Hi Curtis et al.,

Attached please find the contribution to address action item #46, cleaning up references and splitting the remaining references into normative and informative ones. Please let me know if anything is missing and I will update the document and submit together with the comments against D1.2.

regards

Marek

On 12/14/22 09:07, Curtis Knittle wrote:

Colleagues,

Below you will find the current list of assigned and open action items.

Curtis

 

 

 

 

 

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